Words
Some words fill time and don't convey a thought. They merely indicate that someone's there. A someone whose attention you've not caught, or maybe you're the one that's hard to bear. So save your words...
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Coster, I'm more or less the self-appointed grammar lady, so I'll comment on your line 4 and leave the rest to other sonnet experts. Line four should read "I'm the one who's hard to bear," not "I'm...
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The opening line is hexameter, not pentameter. Lines 3 & 4 don't really follow 1 & 2, and they are missing a verb. The second stanza is probably the best, but "decorate your daily grind" feels...
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